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Trapped by ~Helix~

Artist ~Helix~ [gallery]
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Trapped

Postby ~Helix~ » Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:24 pm

Trapped in my own body,
This isn't really me,
I'm living in this hell....
I'm really alive,
Like the others in this room,
So dark and cold and lifeless...

We can't feel,
We can't breathe,
We can't speak...

But we're still alive...

Trapped...




Err... Yeah. Excuse my suckish poetry, or whatever you want to call that.

Character for a story I might be making, if I find the time. Maybe. XD

Comments and criticism welcome and wanted, I love to see what other people think. X3
And yes, yes that is bloody stuffing coming out from his open stitch. :3

(Drawn with a mouse. D:)
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Re: Trapped

Postby Nick » Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:59 pm

Wow, that's awesome. Totally moving to intermediate.. :)
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Re: Trapped

Postby ~Helix~ » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:02 pm

Nick wrote:Wow, that's awesome. Totally moving to intermediate.. :)

Really? Thank you! ^ ^
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Re: Trapped

Postby Yagari <3 » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:07 pm

I like what you did with the red glow around the dogs body.
Very detailed!

but one slight flaw.....
in your poem you said that a dog was trapped in this body, wich was a stuffed animal.So if it was cut open and there was blood, it would not live.
"Look. A gift. I think I'll keep this as a memento....of the time I taught vampires."
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Re: Trapped

Postby Tam » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:07 pm

Totally agree with Nick here Able! That is too awesome for words! =O I love the shading effects you put on the button eye. As proven in most of my Oekaki, I suck with those kind of digital effects. Rock on! You keep getting better and better!
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Re: Trapped

Postby ~Helix~ » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:18 pm

Angelz99 wrote:I like what you did with the red glow around the dogs body.
Very detailed!

but one slight flaw.....
in your poem you said that a dog was trapped in this body, wich was a stuffed animal.So if it was cut open and there was blood, it would not live.

Thank you!

Oh I know, it's supposed to be slightly puzzling. The idea just popped into my head, so i haven't thoroughly planned yet. Here's some of the plot so that the poem makes more sense.

A beautiful she-wolf had been known to live in the dense, wooded marshes. She attracts males and takes them into her abode, using her charming ways to disguise the black magic-possessed wretch that is actually her. After a few hours of this enduring and stuff, the she-wolf will take the male down to her "special room" to show her wooer her doll collection. These dolls look very much alike the drawing above. After the tour, well... *cough hack* Yeah...

She practically kills their skin, their flesh, but not their souls. She keeps them alive in that room, but they can't move or feel, because they have been stuffed and made into living dolls. Part of the black magic. X3 The blood is still there because, even though the blood isn't circulating, the wolf is still in his own body. The stuffing would get bloody too then, no? The wolf mage is rather sloppy when she stuffs, she doesn't bother to clean them. XD

blackwolfspirit wrote:Totally agree with Nick here Able! That is too awesome for words! =O I love the shading effects you put on the button eye. As proven in most of my Oekaki, I suck with those kind of digital effects. Rock on! You keep getting better and better!

Thank you! *glomps* You still know you're the pro here. XD You don't suck with effects, and I love them. ^.^ Still, I'm so uber happy that they're worthy of people's eyes! 8D
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Re: Trapped

Postby Yagari <3 » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:28 pm

My sister says that its kinda freaky, and it looks wrong.It reminds me of a movie....."cough cough" called...."cough"(I'll pm it to you tomorow, the name is to scarey to say now)

No i know.....i agree with my sister, a couple minitues ago i was admiring the detail when i acedentaily scrolled down and i swear i saw it blink at me!
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Re: Trapped

Postby ~Helix~ » Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:34 pm

Angelz99 wrote:My sister says that its kinda freaky, and it looks wrong.It reminds me of a movie....."cough cough" called...."cough"(I'll pm it to you tomorow, the name is to scarey to say now)

No i know.....i agree with my sister, a couple minitues ago i was admiring the detail when i acedentaily scrolled down and i swear i saw it blink at me!

XD It's supposed to be freaky. 8D If the name is too scary to say, I'm guessing it's a wonderfully frightening movie... o_o

It blinked? 0_0; Oh my.. I'll have to try that... :lol:
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Re: Trapped

Postby Bℓυ ωιитєя » Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:32 pm

So totally awsome! I suck terribly on Oekaki! Just because i suck with a mouse. So i can't wait for christmas, I might be getting a tablet.
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Re: Trapped

Postby ~Helix~ » Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:36 pm

hunterandjack wrote:So totally awsome! I suck terribly on Oekaki! Just because i suck with a mouse. So i can't wait for christmas, I might be getting a tablet.

Thanks! Yeah, I hate my mouse. ;A; I guess all three of us, Blacky, you, and I, are all looking forward to hopefully receiving one this Christmas. :lol:

(( Off topic, but post on Shadow Wolves! XD ))
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