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Dapple Gray arabian by HorseGeek911

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Dapple Gray arabian

Postby HorseGeek911 » Fri Jun 24, 2011 7:28 am

hehe hope you guys like it! i even added some shading although it is kinda bad :s
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Re: Dapple Gray arabian

Postby Daisy Dollop » Fri Jun 24, 2011 8:02 am

That's really good! Do you use a tablet? c:
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Re: Dapple Gray arabian

Postby MIND_FANG » Fri Jun 24, 2011 8:14 am

It looks cute! ^^

But here's some constructive criticism to make it better.
1.) where the shoulder area is, you should slope the stomach/ribcage/barrel down more, so the viewer can see that it is proportionate.
2.) The hindquarters are a tad too big for an Arabian. Try a smaller body with a long neck, because arabians have one more vertebrae in their necks which make their necks snake like and long, compared to their petite looking body.
3.) Move the eyes down a bit.

And that's all the advice I can give you. It looks really cute, and you seem to have potential to make great horses. :3 Sorry if I went all ninja on you with the whole proportionate body thing, I'm horse crazy myself. I learned in my horsemanship lessons about the Arabian thing.
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Re: Dapple Gray arabian

Postby HorseGeek911 » Sat Jun 25, 2011 8:33 am

@Zero- nah its okay i don't mind the critz its helping me a lot now :P i still can't get my legs necks right :s
@Swedish- no i do not own but soon i'm planning to.
thank you both for your kind words :P
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