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A Paw in the grass by young blood.

Artist young blood. [gallery]
Time spent 2 hours, 45 minutes
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A Paw in the grass

Postby young blood. » Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:32 am

Just a paw in the grass. Not completely done yet, as you can see, i need to fix the grass and add shading.
What do you think so far?
Also, this is my first lineless drawing.
Comments and constructive criticism appreciated!








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Re: A Paw in the grass

Postby YouMeAtTheHorizon » Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:44 am

I don't think this is quite intermediate yet...
bring me the horizon : youmeatsix : asking alexandria: sws :adtr


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Re: A Paw in the grass

Postby young blood. » Sun Jun 12, 2011 4:41 am

sorry! posted this in the wrong board!








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Re: A Paw in the grass

Postby Suryatha » Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:24 am

hey i think it looks good so far

if you would add a bit more details and shaddings it would look more realistic

also the background makes me a bit confused

i think if the pay is standing in the grass then its not possible to see the sky this way - perhapsif you use the blender and make the grass this way a bit more like grass - it would be perhaps also looking more realistic

i hope i could help you a bit

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Re: A Paw in the grass

Postby young blood. » Mon Jun 13, 2011 5:07 am

thanks! i'll see what i can do.








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