[Vivid]

My first tablet drawing (And the tablet's not even mine) and it's a complete and utter fail.
PLEASE, I NEED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

[.:moonlight:.]

this is nice! i like how it is sketchy looking...here is the critique. the mouth is always hard... you might want to start with that first. i like to start with it when i am doing a side view. you usually don't have to do an ear when the hair is over the half of the face bt because you are making it sketchy that is fine! when you want it to look realistic you want to not see what is covered by the hair unless there is little hair...hope this helps!
~.:moonlight:.

[Vivid]

Yay, thanks soooooo much! I'll keep thatin mind...