[Knoere]

This is the finished comission of the character Verdana from Larkspur. I hope you like her! Please let me know if you want me to change anything.
Any comments are much appreciated!

[die Lille]

wow...
amazing!

really great!!!

[Knoere]

Thank you ^^
Anyone else? I would be glad to get some critique

[die Lille]

go and vote for this masterpiece!!

I think this is worth a comment...
I loooove it very much, Knoere, it's just ggrrrrrrrrreat ^^

[Klaora]

Hello Knoere. I hope you don't mind a little bit of critique. ^^;
The only thing that's really bothering me is that the front legs seem rather short in comparison to the back legs. If the character is crouching, which it looks like s/he might be, then his/her back should be slanted to show the difference in height.
Or perhaps have the legs stretch out a bit further.
A bit of a minor detail, but the marking on his leg isn't highlighted with the rest of his fur.

Other than that, great job. I really love all of the detail you've put into the fur and line-art. I'm not sure why, but I also particularly like the shading and highlighting on the muzzle and ribs. :3

[Knoere]

Thank you for your detailed critique, Klaora.
Yes you are right! I really had problems with the pose - she is supposed to be crouching slightly, that's why the ellbow and shoulder are nearly on the same level...but I never thought about the point, that the back should be more slanted It just did not cross my mind, but now I know what bothered me all along (sometimes I just feel like having a brick wall right before my eyes )
And for that marking: I added it just before finishing (and I guess I just got lazy *meeh*) but I think I will edit that! Thanks for pointing it out