by -Obsidian » Sun May 01, 2011 11:15 pm
It's actually quite good, just needs a bit of work on anatomy and a little more shading and you'll be flying hun.
The front leg was a good attempt, just it looks like it's sticking out un-natrualy. Try to keep it a little closer to the body. The best pictures are those when things aren't so oviouse, and the viewer has to take time to spot them, as it keeps them hooked for longer. So don't worry about the front leg not being so oviouse. If you want to make it stand out, shade it like that and maybe the light could hit it there so your eyes are drawn to it more perhaps?
But very good anyway, well done.