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Bowie :) by DaDwarf

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Bowie :)

Postby DaDwarf » Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:42 pm

This is my doggeh, Bowie, a chocolate labrador.

I used this picture


I don't like the eyes, bleh xD Tell me what you think!
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby MalleusGrey » Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:01 am

This is not quite intermediate just yet...
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby DaDwarf » Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:17 am

Instead of going around and telling people it's not intermediate enough you could also try to give them some advise. Advise they can actually work with. It's very de-motivating to tell people they are not good enough.
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby -Obsidian » Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:33 am

As zombie said, it's not quite itermiadite, but i'll extend on that:

As it's lineless, it's pretty good, but you good do with defining the fur and shading more. If you just do a couple of flicks of pale brown (maybe a slightly goldy colour even) and just do it down one side where the light hits, and a dark colour where the shading should be, it will be looking better. Also, try to work on the eyes a bit. I was always taught the eyes are the main part of the animal, so you want to make them give the mood of the drawing, as eyes tell everything. Hope this helps :)
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby Beee » Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:13 am

The jaw- maybe you could thin it out a little, and make a body, and a backround. Other than that, its good enough for intermediate.
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby DaDwarf » Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:15 am

I edited. Actually like it better this way ;)

Don't see why this was moved, Last time i posted one of my pictures in Beginner's and it was moved to Intermediate Oekaki..ohwell..
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby killpop » Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:43 am

Thats Brill,But saying its not intermediate Just yet,Thinks like Your art is intermediate....Why not think about that?,
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Re: Bowie :)

Postby DaDwarf » Sat Apr 30, 2011 5:14 am

Sweetlzes wrote:Thats Brill,But saying its not intermediate Just yet,Thinks like Your art is intermediate....Why not think about that?,
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I'm not sure what you are saying, but..thanks?
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