by caress. » Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:57 am
It's very good, but it doesn't belong in Intermediate! C:
Keep practicing though; you have talent!
Someday, you'll post here regularly!
~Kara
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caress. on Tue Feb 28, 2012 12:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I'm wasted, losing time
I'm a foolish, fragile spine
I want all that is not mine
I want him but we're not right
In the darkness I will meet my creators
And they will all agree, that I'm a suffocator
I should go now quietly
For my bones have found a place
To lie down and sleep
Where all my layers can become reeds
All my limbs can become trees
All my children can become me
What a' mess I leave
To follow
In the darkness I will meet my creators
They will all agree, I'm a suffocator
Suffocator
Oh, no
I'm sorry if I smothered you
I sometimes wish I'd stayed inside
My mother
Never' to come out