[Chasing Dreams]

This is a wolf in the mountain range. The timer is a little bit off, I had to go off a couple times, and teach my sister a lesson, for bugging me! Well at first I was very scared of posting in intermediate (Spelling?) If you dont think that this is worthy of intermediate please feel free to move! Comments please!! I think the wolf was a BIG fail, I like the back-ground better!

[Akachi's Nightmare]

Wow... the back ground is great! I love the stars!

[Chasing Dreams]

Thank you!!

[Soruc]

Nice artwork! I have some crits, though.
First of all, the head looks a bit too small. It should be less curved at the start of the muzzle- it should be slightly curvy and go up and curve- like a hill would.
And second of all, the nose is a bit too big. it should be half that size. And the scar should be more 'sharp' at the ends, like real scars. And for the shading- the wolf should look less 'shiny'. There should actually be more darkened areas than lightened areas.
As for the neck, it could be thinner and smaller than the body- like most necks are.

[Chasing Dreams]

Ok...thank you!

[Tesumph]

Nice artwork! I have some crits, though.
First of all, the head looks a bit too small. It should be less curved at the start of the muzzle- it should be slightly curvy and go up and curve- like a hill would.
And second of all, the nose is a bit too big. it should be half that size. And the scar should be more 'sharp' at the ends, like real scars. And for the shading- the wolf should look less 'shiny'. There should actually be more darkened areas than lightened areas.
As for the neck, it could be thinner and smaller than the body- like most necks are.

I disagree with most of this, honestly. The head is the perfect size for a wolf. You can't see the rest of the body, so how can you judge that? What you said about the curve of the head... wolves have very flat foreheads. Real wolves, that is. The forehead/curve should actually be flatter, not taller. Here's what I'm talking about: http://www.wwuk.org/image/saskiawolves.jpg

The nose should be a bit longer, actually. Wolves have extremely long muzzles. Only a cartoon should have a nose any shorter than what is portrayed here. And even then, an unrealistic cartoon.

I agree about the shading and the scars, but the neck really shouldn't be any thinner. This is obviously a wolf that lives in very cold areas, therefore it's fur should be very thick. The neck is the right width in this case. If is was a a breed that didn't live in snow, it could be thinner, but all wolves in general have thick necks.

[Soruc]

The muzzle could be longer, yes. I think that was what made the head look strange. The actual nose is a bit big, though. even for a real wolf.

[Tesumph]

Oh, nose as in actual nose. I thought you meant all of the "nose", like the muzzle.

[Chasing Dreams]

Thank you both, I do agree this need some fixing!