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Postby .:Night Fury:. » Fri Apr 01, 2011 7:47 am

omg Mah friend let me install my tablet on her computer so I cannnn drawww here again! *spazzez*

Uhm, I just wanna know if I should continue this? :T It's random and crappy. But I like the concept, althought there isn't much to it.

I would appreciate any crits, too!
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Postby petvet3 » Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:27 am

I think you should! Can I give some tips? Try making the head a little less square. It would fit with the rest of the body better. But I like it a lot! Keep going with it.
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Postby Cougar28 » Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:53 am

Well I think it's perfect, please keep going. I would love to see more art from a wonderful artist like you! :mrgreen:
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Postby .:Night Fury:. » Fri Apr 01, 2011 10:48 am

petvet3 wrote:I think you should! Can I give some tips? Try making the head a little less square. It would fit with the rest of the body better. But I like it a lot! Keep going with it.


Haha, yeah, my style tends to get all angular at times. XD I may or may not change it. And thanks!

Cougar28 wrote:Well I think it's perfect, please keep going. I would love to see more art from a wonderful artist like you! :mrgreen:


I will, and thankssss!!!
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Postby Lilian Nightshade » Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:01 pm

Some crits...

The head and face are really well done, but the chest and body are a bit too large, making the dragon look disproportional by giving the impression that the head is too small, and the neck, too thin. The wing position looks weird too... A dragon wing arm is basically connected to it's shoulder, so you could draw the arm more aligned to it, since in the sketch it looks l i k e it's growing out of the neck. By the way, the left wing arm, being shown behind the dragon, is a bit too thick...

Well, I hope this helps. :3
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Re: ?

Postby .:Night Fury:. » Sat Apr 02, 2011 4:45 am

Lilian Nightshade wrote:Some crits...

The head and face are really well done, but the chest and body are a bit too large, making the dragon look disproportional by giving the impression that the head is too small, and the neck, too thin. The wing position looks weird too... A dragon wing arm is basically connected to it's shoulder, so you could draw the arm more aligned to it, since in the sketch it looks l i k e it's growing out of the neck. By the way, the left wing arm, being shown behind the dragon, is a bit too thick...

Well, I hope this helps. :3


Alright, I see. (: I agree with you about the body and such; and the wing behind him, isn't the actual size it's gonna be. I was jus sketching where it is going to be placed. XD it won't be that thick lol

Thanks for the crits! I will take them into consideration when I work on this again. :D
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Re: ?

Postby .:Night Fury:. » Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:07 pm

BUMPITY BUMP BUMP don't ask

Ah need moar critz, pleeeaaassssse. I want dis tew look good. Because right now it looks like crap. >:B
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Postby Sunbeargirl » Sun May 08, 2011 9:39 pm

Awesome! You should finish this! And make an editable out of it. ^.^
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