[.Applejack.]

It's not very good.
Crit would be nice, just
how I can I can make it better.
I don't know, maybe you guys can see,
what's happening
Filly

[sara6206]

i think that the black and white dog is AMAZING!! but i think if you stretched out the brown dogs snout thing it would be even better but even now i couldnt draw that in a million years

[Wandering Sketch]

I like the texture on both animals, and the fur seems to be going in the right direct, so there. Maybe if you added a background it wouldn't look so much like they were just staring at each other, though. The eyes are very pretty, but maybe something broken behind them, so they can be looking at each other as if saying 'no one says a word about this to Mom'?

I dunno, never mind, perhaps I don't know what I'm talking about.

[~Nonexistant]

I think its really good.
Keep the smudge tool to about size 14. Maybe that would help.
Otherwise, this is great!

[.Applejack.]

I just put in a background, but it's really weird, I was just bored and wanted to do something. It's kind of ugly now, I'll probably end up getting rid of the new back ground but for now, it'a there so feel free to commemt and or hate it.