Pet story! 1/30

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Once upon a time, there was a dog. This dog looked different, and acted different from all the other dogs. No one liked her. Her name was Alo, and because no one liked her, she tried to distance herself from everyone. She needed a job though, so she decided to work in a farm. She didn’t like this job, but every time she went to a job interview, they all said no, and laughed at her face. One day, Alo was working in the farm. “Ugh… the bugs are eating the cabbage again… I’m not getting paid enough for this.” Alo said, with bitterness in her voice. Her boss heard her and shot her a mean look.
Alo said, nervously “O-Oh… I’m sorry boss!”



If you guys like where this is going, make sure to bump this post so that others can see, and so i can make the next part!

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I know that my story might suck, but I would like someone to read it and tell me how I can improve at least