[Mimi-911]

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[~~*~Isis~*~~]

[Mimi-911]

thanks!

[Monstercat]

it's great but I don't think it belongs in the intermediate oekaki
maybe you could do a little more shading and a less pointy nose?

Hope this helps
wolf_lou

[Mimi-911]

I can do that now and thanks for the critisism.

[Monstercat]

No problem

[Mimi-911]

[osteoh]

Hmm...
Try angling the muzzle into the face a little more and adding some fluffy bits to show its furry. :3

[Mimi-911]

... ok

[Soruc]

Sorry this isn't quite intermediate.

Some crits:
1. Well, to start off, he Muzzle isn't square, it should be rounder at the end. I suggest looking at pictures of real wolves to see how the muzzle looks like.

2. The chin is shorter than the upper part of the wolves' muzzle.

3. The top part of the muzzle is too big.

4. It doesn't really look furry to me...

5. The chain around it's neck would look better if it sticks out more, it's not flat against it's neck.

6. Look at pictures of real wolves as I said, see how the anatomy works and stuff.


That's all my crits.