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Critique wanted! by venti

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Critique wanted!

Postby venti » Sun Oct 25, 2020 4:17 am

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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby clowns » Sun Oct 25, 2020 6:04 am

some critique (or advice idk)

use this smoothing tool, it makes the lines look more smooth and nice. Also (if you don't already) make a sketch or smthn, these are just things i do
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby MrM3atb4all » Sun Oct 25, 2020 6:09 am

I think your art is pretty good! Smoothing tool would help a lot!
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby venti » Sun Oct 25, 2020 6:21 am

clowns wrote:some critique (or advice idk)

use this smoothing tool, it makes the lines look more smooth and nice. Also (if you don't already) make a sketch or smthn, these are just things i do


I like cheese wrote:I think your art is pretty good! Smoothing tool would help a lot!


Thank you both! I'll try it out.
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby SnowyEevee » Sun Oct 25, 2020 7:15 am

here is some advice:
maybe try drawing the ears after you draw the head, it helps alot with focusing on the ears, look at my eevee drawing from september, the ears look really amazing for it:
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby Electronia » Sun Oct 25, 2020 9:50 am

Try using the watercolor tool for hair, and the soft eraser for eye highlights. <3
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby CHIMINGSOUL » Sun Oct 25, 2020 9:58 am

Here's some help!

Try using LOTS of references (that you can use with credit)
You can find Chickensmoothie's free to use (with credit) references here!

Try making a sketch, and then lining it. It helps. You can correct errors in the sketch with the final line art. It does take longer but it's worth it! Make sure to do the 2 on different layers.

Smoothing!! Everyone has a different smoothing level, and it takes awhile to find it, but it will definitely help.

You can also ask people to redline something you draw with the correct anatomy, which tells you what you need to improve on most of the time.

Hope this helps!
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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby venti » Mon Oct 26, 2020 2:11 am

SnowyEevee wrote:here is some advice:
maybe try drawing the ears after you draw the head, it helps alot with focusing on the ears, look at my eevee drawing from september, the ears look really amazing for it:
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Thank you! Nice drawing btw!

Phasmophobia wrote:Here's some help!

Try using LOTS of references (that you can use with credit)
You can find Chickensmoothie's free to use (with credit) references here!

Try making a sketch, and then lining it. It helps. You can correct errors in the sketch with the final line art. It does take longer but it's worth it! Make sure to do the 2 on different layers.

Smoothing!! Everyone has a different smoothing level, and it takes awhile to find it, but it will definitely help.

You can also ask people to redline something you draw with the correct anatomy, which tells you what you need to improve on most of the time.

Hope this helps!


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Re: Critique wanted!

Postby venti » Tue Oct 27, 2020 1:30 am

XxLilymexX wrote:Hello! A tip is to try to use reference images on the things you draw, you can search on your browser for images, or use the reference gallery of CS.

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