[typicalkelpie]

timers off i had a class in the middle of this -.-

but heyyy i never draw guys because for some reason they are just super hard for me to draw but i tried and i mean i dont think it looks that bad like i'd say im pretty proud of this

constructive criticism is greatly appreciated tho :>

[Thovatos]

I think you did great! The only thing I'd advise is trying a different jaw shape! A chin shape like that will make a character always seem younger if they are male, but it still looks great! Especially the shoulders down. Very nice work and color pallet, fren. I wish I could pull myself away from semi-realism into something with more style~~ You've earned a follow~ (definitely would be down for an art trade XD)

[typicalkelpie]

I think you did great! The only thing I'd advise is trying a different jaw shape! A chin shape like that will make a character always seem younger if they are male, but it still looks great! Especially the shoulders down. Very nice work and color pallet, fren. I wish I could pull myself away from semi-realism into something with more style~~ You've earned a follow~ (definitely would be down for an art trade XD)

thank you for the advice!! :o (and dang!! i took a peek at your gallery and you have gorgeous art, i'd love to do an art trade sometime!) and thank you for the follow as well asfdmkdfghsd !!

[turnip_soup]

cute

[typicalkelpie]

cute

thanks! <:

[KathrynKat]

Lovely!

[Kusakabe]

Wow this is absolutely amazing! Definitely gonna follow.

[꧁tennis❤midget꧂]

I love it so much! (bit of constructive criticism coming-) I think the best way to draw guys is to have less defined lashes, but that's a pretty simple task. INCREDIBLE, I LOVE YOUR WORK BTW~!!

[typicalkelpie]

Lovely!

thank you! :^)

Wow this is absolutely amazing! Definitely gonna follow.

aaA thank you so much !! <3

I love it so much! (bit of constructive criticism coming-) I think the best way to draw guys is to have less defined lashes, but that's a pretty simple task. INCREDIBLE, I LOVE YOUR WORK BTW~!!

yess, thats something i have to work on- since i tend to draw all my eyes usually with lashes so when it comes to drawing guys i just have this moment of "..wait" and its messes me up xD but thank you !! ;o; it means a lot <3

[Exoclipse]

I LOVE HIM, the colors and design are stunning ;o;

Not really a criticism because this looks fantastic, but just a general tip that really helped me learn:
generally speaking, a dude's chest is essentially an upside-down trapezoid split down the middle, and the corners of that pectoral muscle actually connect to the shoulder muscle (I think this diagram shows that pretty good). But honestly the most important thing is just keep learning more and doing your research, and then applying that to your practicing. Just keep doing that, and you will improve! Repetition and conscious learning are your most valuable tools.
also I draw way too many dudes, so that's apart of it I guess qwq