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(A) White Cat by monsolo

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(A) White Cat

Postby monsolo » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:15 pm

Tried a few different things, not really happy with the result

why do the eyes look like that??

please if you're seeing this, how can I make the eyes look less horrifying??
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Re: White Cat

Postby rat mama » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:18 pm

maybe make them bigger, that might make them look softer :^) and maybe add some shine?
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Re: White Cat

Postby monsolo » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:25 pm

rat mama wrote:maybe make them bigger, that might make them look softer :^) and maybe add some shine?


Ah thank you, I do think that would help!!
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Re: White Cat

Postby Sylphicat » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:26 pm

Try using a reference picture

Also, cat eyes are not ovals that are even all around

Cat eyes have ovals that droop more at the bottom of the eyes
And the top of the eyes slant inward some towards the nose, not downward to the cheeks slightly like you have

However like humans, cats too can have unique shaped eyes that are different varying by the type of cats and shapes of their faces.

If you want a more cartoony style, then you can make up your own unique eye shapes!

EDIT: Cat pupils are not round. They are only round when they get bigger in bright light or see something of interest,

Edit2: Make them bigger too. Cats have unusual big eyes for their small heads. This makes their vision supernatural

Last edit... They need shines in them too....
Your poor cat has lifeless eyes
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Re: White Cat

Postby monsolo » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:31 pm

Sylphica wrote:Try using a reference picture

Also, cat eyes are not ovals that are even all around

Cat eyes have ovals that droop more at the bottom of the eyes
And the top of the eyes slant inward some towards the nose, not downward like you have

However like humans, cats too can have unique shaped eyes that are different varying by the type of cats and shapes of their faces.

If you want a more cartoony style, then you can make up your own unique eye shapes!

EDIT: Cat pupils are not round. They are only round when they get bigger in bright light or see something of interest,


Thank you! I really should be using a ref
I'll definitely take all this into consideration for my next cat!
I really appreciate the tips c':
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Re: White Cat

Postby Sylphicat » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:34 pm

Strawberry Milk wrote:
Sylphica wrote:Try using a reference picture

Also, cat eyes are not ovals that are even all around

Cat eyes have ovals that droop more at the bottom of the eyes
And the top of the eyes slant inward some towards the nose, not downward like you have

However like humans, cats too can have unique shaped eyes that are different varying by the type of cats and shapes of their faces.

If you want a more cartoony style, then you can make up your own unique eye shapes!

EDIT: Cat pupils are not round. They are only round when they get bigger in bright light or see something of interest,


Thank you! I really should be using a ref
I'll definitely take all this into consideration for my next cat!
I really appreciate the tips c':


I added more tips after you posted... They are important so please re-read! No problem!
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Re: White Cat

Postby Sylphicat » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:35 pm

Also, I will be following you to see your progress!
I love this cat drawing, even with the eyes!
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Re: White Cat

Postby monsolo » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:37 pm

Sylphica wrote:Also, I will be following you to see your progress!
I love this cat drawing, even with the eyes!

I did reread, thank you so much!
I hope to improve soon!! c:
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Re: White Cat

Postby MintyZedGrimes » Sun Jan 12, 2020 10:54 pm

This was already said, but never be afraid to use some reference! And some shine in the eyes couldn't hurt. Keep at it!
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Re: White Cat

Postby monsolo » Sun Jan 12, 2020 11:37 pm

Huge thanks to everyone who commented; I edited the eyes in a second drawing and it looks so much better already thanks to your help!!!
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