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Working on anatomy etc. by BlossomTail

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Working on anatomy etc.

Postby BlossomTail » Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:22 pm

I'm working on some things to make my drawings better..can anybody help me with how to improve on stuff I've noted/ point out some stuff that could be better? Like the whole thing? xD

Criticism needed! :3
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Re: Working on anatomy etc.

Postby Onyxeva » Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:41 pm

right now it looks like the neck is too big for the head, if you slim it down (maybe where the 't' in criticism is) i think it would look better ^^ that would allow you to slim the body a bit too but i think it looks fine as is~

you'd also be able to see the other ear from this angle and cat paws have 4 toes on all feet instead of 3 =D (though the front paws have the dew claw which is like a thumb)

as with drawing any animal its always good to look at photo references of the animal~ <3 hope this helps~
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Re: Working on anatomy etc.

Postby BlossomTail » Sat Jan 15, 2011 4:43 pm

Okay, thank you so much! I'll use that for future reference! <3
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Re: Working on anatomy etc.

Postby Apsel » Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:42 pm

i think the paws are FINE
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