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unfinished work by louiseberg87

Artist louiseberg87 [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 25 minutes
Drawing sessions 1
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unfinished work

Postby louiseberg87 » Sun Jun 23, 2019 8:00 am

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Re: unfinished work

Postby DoveCG » Fri Jul 05, 2019 2:17 am

I love this! It's a really cool action pose. The flowing hair, butt-cape, and dust are great and I love that hint of a smirk. Such confidence exuded all over... XD

If you're open to some criticism, I think the extended leg's ankle should be less firmly planted and less definitively verticle, since it feels like this pose is meant to be a transition from one stance into another. Also, maybe that leg needs more of an arch? I feel like having the knee dipping down, even if it's not touching the ground, would be more natural. I know nothing about martial arts though and I know transitional positioning can get pretty funky even when it's 100% realistic.

Also, happy 4th day, if you're also in the US!
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