[abandondacc]

Yeahhh

Idk about the neck it still looks off

[67Phlox]

This is a really nice dilo!

I think the problem is that it doesn't have enough curvature as it comes out of the head.
I have to admit that the neck in the sketch was a little bit better.
Here's a visualization just in case (a bit rushed ^^'). --------------------------------->
I'm not really too big on dino anatomy anymore, so I think you should get a second opinion. I hope this was helpful! If not, feel free to let me know.