[monochromia]

h h i'm about to sleep but I'd love a lot of criticism on my sketch before I do the proper lining and colouring?
I seem to find all my mistakes half way through drawing and i'm very new so I'm hoping I can learn from the CS community!
I feel like I messed the hand up a lot but I can't fix it no matter how I do it

[madcom]

i'd make the head a little bit bigger, and make the hand that's showing a little bit skinnier. also, if the other hand is supposed to be covered make the sleeve a little bit longer.
p.s.: i love your username uwu

[monochromia]

i'd make the head a little bit bigger, and make the hand that's showing a little bit skinnier. also, if the other hand is supposed to be covered make the sleeve a little bit longer.
p.s.: i love your username uwu

aa, thank you!!
i love your username too ;;