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Triple S by Dawnstorm111

Artist Dawnstorm111 [gallery]
Time spent 47 minutes
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Triple S

Postby Dawnstorm111 » Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:32 am

Art of my babe - https://toyhou.se/992898.shori-shita-shosha

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Re: Triple S

Postby Dawnstorm111 » Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:47 am

Dawnstorm111 wrote:Art of my babe - https://toyhou.se/992898.shori-shita-shosha

Any critiques?
Forum/viewtopic.php?f=120&t=4294877 <- Getting rid of all of my pets, including lists and store pets
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Re: Triple S

Postby Dawnstorm111 » Mon Dec 03, 2018 11:25 am

Dawnstorm111 wrote:Art of my babe - https://toyhou.se/992898.shori-shita-shosha

Any critiques?
Forum/viewtopic.php?f=120&t=4294877 <- Getting rid of all of my pets, including lists and store pets
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Re: Triple S

Postby pastel punk! » Mon Dec 03, 2018 12:03 pm

Dawnstorm111 wrote:
Dawnstorm111 wrote:Art of my babe - https://toyhou.se/992898.shori-shita-shosha

Any critiques?

Hiiii!
So, don't take any of this personally, i'm just trying to help you out!
I'm not sure what you draw with, but it seems like a mouse, which is fine, as I did that for a long time!
Maybe smooth your lines out more, though.
Another thing is her hair colors, it looks very unnatural. I recommend blending the pink and black so it doesn't look so... uhh, fake?
That's really all i have! Keep up the good work!

Edit: Also the face looks more like an emoji. I recommend watching Lavendertownes video about expressions, it's very helpful!
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