by Coco Bunny » Wed Nov 07, 2018 10:23 am
It looks really good!
I do think you should work on the lining a little more - It's quite scruffy and wobbly, and feathered in places. Using the smoothing tool helps me, so it might help you as well!
Maybe work out what position you want it to be in - we can only see half the face and nose, and yet the body (with the way it's drawn) looks a bit more positioned towards the audience. Again, the smoothing tool makes this more clear. Also look up the anatomy, try with shapes and make sure your proportions are all correct.
But I really like how it looks! I can't wait to see how you improve in the future <3