[Masterplan]

Looking for ways to improve my art ;o
It's very stylised though so please keep that in mind!!
Looking for ways to better my lineart too ^^

Edit:: reference picture

[Inkiing]

the ears and eyes are very small compared to the head - the nose could be a little more roman - the lines could be a bit straighter and smoother? id stay away from drawing so much detail into the lines and leave that for shading - not a bad start tho

[eleutheromania]

too many detail lines. not really needed unless you’re shading. if you’re going to do detail lines they need to be smaller. the eye is too low on the jaw. needs to move up and left. the jaw needs to be smoother and less jagged if possibly. i know that can be hard without a tablet. ears are too small and the top line of the head should be a little more rounded towards the nose. shoulder is set too far forward. i could red line for you also if you want and upload it? hope none of this is too harsh since you asked for critique