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Princess Puppy by Mimi-911

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Time spent 2 hours, 23 minutes
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Princess Puppy

Postby Mimi-911 » Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:24 pm

Lame name... But this is my first drawing in intermediate. Is this worth it or should it be moved to beginner?
I'd love to hear your comments and critisism....
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Geode » Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:26 pm

Try to add shading and a shadow under the dog. Also, adding detail to the grass and sky may take some time but it really makes art look realistic. I like the pose the most, it seems the dog is reflecting on something...
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Mimi-911 » Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:29 pm

Thank you. I will add the best shading I can now...
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Mimi-911 » Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:39 pm

Done. Is the shading a bit more detailed Geode?
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Scabs297 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:43 pm

The moon kinda looks lopsided
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Mimi-911 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:49 pm

I guess it does... Maybe this isn't good enough for intermediates...
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Re: Princess Puppy

Postby Scabs297 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:04 pm

I think you should practice shading and detail in the beginner's oekaki and when you feel more comfortable and confident with your art, then you should try intermediate again :D
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