[Fledgling_Tempest]

I got a film noir inspired longneck stuck in my head... so here we are! Perspective is not my strong suit, and doing it on a body did not make it any easier _._ but I'm delighted with how it turned out.

To win this longneck I would like to see a mysterious picture/gif/art and a piece of writing under 500 words to accompany it. Any kind of writing, a poem, a story, an interview, even gibberish if it fits!


Username: DuskzeHedgie
Longneck Name: François Deneuve
Gender: Male

End Date: August 17
If you need an extension just let me know.

[MoonlightTabby]

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Res ;o

[ThePaintedPitBull]

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Reserve!!

Your Longnecks are like miniture art pieces Fledgling!! So stunning :0

Also, it’s great that it can sound like gibberish because I feel like everything I write sounds like that now XD

[Chiikapuu]

Username: Chiikapuu
Longneck Name: Noir
Gender: Female
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The air lay silent on the ghostly still day, echoing my sighing through the hallway
"I wish i could go back to that day when everything was okay"
One step
"Mom, are you proud of me right now? Can you see me"
Second step
"Are you finally proud of your baby girl, who you left when she were a baby?"
Third step
"I want to be happy again but i freaking can't"
I started to sob and my eyes were filling up with tears, i was slowly getting flashbacks of my past
As i took my 4th step, all i felt was cold, empty space and my mothers warmth
"Bye, mom i love you and i hope you are proud of me now"
I smiled with tears on my cheekbones as i took my 5th step deeper towards the cold void surrounded by all of my memories and good things
I felt nothing, there was finally peace, there was finally a chapter of silence and the sounds have stopped


"A thorn defends the rose, harming only those who would steal the blossom"


Note: Yeah, i am okay i just tend to write sad stuff c':

[DuskzeHedgie]

aaaaa sooo incredibbbllee
I've had a draft saved for this- I'm almost done with it eeeee
gl everyone!! >DD

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Username: DuskzeHedgie
Longneck Name: François Deneuve
Gender: Male

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Poem;
Seconds from midnight, the lightning struck twice.
In the thick rolling fog, no lamp would suffice.
The whistle of the carriage, the click of the tracks,
A night for espionage, but he's uncovering facts.
With a flick of his fingers, a cigarette doused,
With the shuffle of footsteps, suspicions aroused.
In the dim of the moonlight, through the thick pouring rain,
A man with a secret makes his way to the train.
Two strangers with pasts, holding keys to the case,
One watched after the other, poised to give chase.
The shriek of the steam engine, blaring last call,
Then the crack of a gunshot sound the second man's fall.
The first swore a curse as she dashed to the scene,
while someplace close by, frightened onlookers scream.
His intentions to save rendered instantly moot,
with a bullet to the head fate was made absolute.
A quick scan of the station left nothing to be seen,
the assassin long gone through the smoke and the steam.
Then a noise of frustration as distant sirens wail,
to come all this way, work this hard, and to fail.
The clock strikes midnight as thunder rolls low.
The first man leaves the body, but has nowhere to go.
His journey for naught, now unsure what to do,
the mystery undone with the death of his final clue.

[triplethesix]

no time, sorry!

[Fledgling_Tempest]

may i request an extension?

Of course, would the 17th (Friday) be enough time?



@Painted and Duskze Thank you, it always means so much to hear that others enjoy it :)

[ThePaintedPitBull]

I know I’m not the one who requested an extension, but that would be so great! School started for me this week and I haven’t been able to compose my entry yet ;-;

[Fledgling_Tempest]

Bump!

I know I’m not the one who requested an extension, but that would be so great! School started for me this week and I haven’t been able to compose my entry yet ;-;

Ah, I totally understand. School hasn't even started yet for me but is already managing to creep in.

[Fledgling_Tempest]

This contest is now closed. I'll judge it tomorrow (or this evening if I have time).