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improvement? by .hyena

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improvement?

Postby .hyena » Wed Jan 03, 2018 2:41 pm

so I just decided to test how much I've improved and I think I have a lot. this was mainly a shading test strictly without blending (unless I was getting a base color) and I just realized that this should've been in sketches and experiments. oh well lol. the shading could be better but I got excited to finish it, so here you go.
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Re: improvement?

Postby thou art I » Wed Jan 03, 2018 3:06 pm

this looks really nice! Love the fur!
But I would make the jaw longer, since at it's current length the wolf would have a big overbite!
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Re: improvement?

Postby .hyena » Wed Jan 03, 2018 3:10 pm

lesbirb wrote:this looks really nice! Love the fur!
But I would make the jaw longer, since at it's current length the wolf would have a big overbite!

thank you for the advice! i'll definitely fix that at some point!
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