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Are these any good? by Muffin_Wolf

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Are these any good?

Postby Muffin_Wolf » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:07 pm

Did I do an ok job on these guys? Please be nice, but don't be afraid to critique! Thanks everyone! ;)
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby KayTheProblemPup » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:09 pm

Yes these are awesome and well made! But my one critique is that the dots on the two dogs are too perfect, fur doesn't make a perfect circle so make if a little more loose (if you get what that means lol) Otherwise these are good.
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby Muffin_Wolf » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:10 pm

Thank you! I will try and use your info the next time!
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby saltcow » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:12 pm

      i really like the first one!

      the rainbow on on the bottom is just a little bit blocky and eh.

      i would suggest using the blend tool, air brush, or pastel colors look really nice!
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby Muffin_Wolf » Thu Dec 21, 2017 12:36 pm

Thank you! I'll try that the next time!
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby sockwearer » Thu Dec 21, 2017 1:28 pm

Personally, the fourth is the best. I would suggest to make the paw markings on the third less level, maybe make one have a tiny bit higher up white than the others. Also, agreeing with the other suggestions that have been made so far.
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby CrazyB » Thu Dec 21, 2017 1:52 pm

tulip-pony wrote:Did I do an ok job on these guys? Please be nice, but don't be afraid to critique! Thanks everyone! ;)

i redid your heres some improvements for you ...you can do what ever you want with them except id like to keep the 4th one
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby Muffin_Wolf » Fri Dec 22, 2017 12:53 am

Thank you all for the suggestions! :3
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Re: Are these any good?

Postby Pixelated_Prophecies » Sat Dec 23, 2017 11:40 am

My only advice is for the rainbow one. I would suggest using only one to three colors and using shades or tints of those colors (example: character with blue, light blue, dark blue, orange, light orange). Other than that, these designs look good!
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