[Loki Laufeyson~]

Horse sketch, I think im getting better! I would love some tips and comments on how to make this even better!

[cassieluvspups]

um maybe you could add a little color

[AlaynaRocks]

Ya add some color otherwise its perfect!

[Loki Laufeyson~]

Okay ^^ Thanks

[cassieluvspups]

[Nanuuk]

Try making the part just below the throat thicker. Horses have a bulky neck c:
Also, try making the shoulder joint less 'noticeable'. I understand that this is a sketch, but try shading it to make it 'there' instead of lines? ^^;

Otherwise, perfect <3

[Loki Laufeyson~]

Okay, I will try that, thank you for the the tip! I have never shaded before, but I will try x) And I would colour but I drew it on the wrong layer and since this is just a experiment, it wouldnt really matter, but I will attempt shading ^^

[Loki Laufeyson~]

Is that better?

[Nanuuk]

Yeah, thats better ^^; I'd also suggest something else -
Try making the lip of the horses head mre noticable, and the bit just below its cheekbone thinner. ^^;

[Loki Laufeyson~]

That last tip was slightly confusing, but I think I corrected what you suggested ^^