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Darling : WIP : Tips? by kaz(:

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Darling : WIP : Tips?

Postby kaz(: » Sun Mar 05, 2017 12:37 pm

Any tips on the body? I feel like its kinda awkward. It's mainly the arms and where the waist dip and hip curves thats bugging me and i dont know what to do XD

Ok, so im going for a girl in the rain holding an umbrella with the quote "Darling, you'll be just fine." Yes she will be clothed, the shoulder blades are just to help me w/a frame of reference. When i color it the palette will be mainly lavender, purples, blues and a couple of pinks/warm oranges. I will go for watercolor
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Re: Darling : Tips? : WIP

Postby kaz(: » Tue Mar 07, 2017 8:22 am

bump!
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Re: Darling : WIP : Tips?

Postby okyourgrace » Tue Mar 07, 2017 9:41 am

i'm not too good at explaining things but i'll try haha
first off, the neck looks a little too wide!! i'd suggest making it a little straighter and a tad smaller,, idk what im saying HAHHA. her head is also a bit big so maybe try making it smaller orrrrr making her body bigger?? idk
i'd suggest making her a little curvier since her body looks kinda square

honestly this picture would help a lot more than me
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Re: Darling : WIP : Tips?

Postby kaz(: » Sun Mar 19, 2017 1:43 pm

okyourgrace wrote:i'm not too good at explaining things but i'll try haha
first off, the neck looks a little too wide!! i'd suggest making it a little straighter and a tad smaller,, idk what im saying HAHHA. her head is also a bit big so maybe try making it smaller orrrrr making her body bigger?? idk
i'd suggest making her a little curvier since her body looks kinda square

honestly this picture would help a lot more than me

Thank you!!!
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♫ Hi! I'm Kaz.
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dancing, reading and trading! I hope you
have a nice day/night! Trade Thread

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