Title says it all.
I really want to know what I could improve on in my art. Please don't be scared to tell me if there's anything wrong with it!
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Please give me constructive criticism by friend.shaped.mono
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Please give me constructive criticism
by friend.shaped.mono » Sun Jan 22, 2017 4:51 pm
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Re: Give me constructive criticism
by friend.shaped.mono » Sun Jan 22, 2017 5:03 pm
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He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Re: Give me constructive criticism
by friend.shaped.mono » Sun Jan 22, 2017 8:54 pm
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Re: Please give me constructive criticism
by Violet Berries » Sun Jan 22, 2017 10:03 pm
Honestly, I love your art. Constructive criticism: Maybe use more colours, tones, etc. in your art. <3
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Re: Please give me constructive criticism
by shwazzup » Sun Jan 22, 2017 10:06 pm
I love your art <33
I would suggest using more colors when needed, for example the eyes 0:
You should figure out how much light you want the orb to be letting off, and do the lighting on the cat judging by what you've decided.
Anyways, that's about it! Just keep practicing!
I would suggest using more colors when needed, for example the eyes 0:
You should figure out how much light you want the orb to be letting off, and do the lighting on the cat judging by what you've decided.
Anyways, that's about it! Just keep practicing!
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shwazzup here!
Feel free to ever PM
me if you ever wanna
talk! I am an average
teenager who loves
fishing, canoeing,
hockey, and archery!
Good Day~
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Re: Please give me constructive criticism
by friend.shaped.mono » Sun Jan 22, 2017 10:57 pm
shwazzup wrote:I love your art <33
I would suggest using more colors when needed, for example the eyes 0:
You should figure out how much light you want the orb to be letting off, and do the lighting on the cat judging by what you've decided.
Anyways, that's about it! Just keep practicing!
Violet Berries wrote:Honestly, I love your art. Constructive criticism: Maybe use more colours, tones, etc. in your art. <3
Alright, thanks!
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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Mono
He/it/void
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hi, im mono :3
im always on the hunt for space
event pets! idk where mine went :<
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