by forestfolke » Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:11 pm
It is a cute sketch! My tips are to make the eyes a bit smaller, I understand that may be your style but it's just a bit too large imo, also try tilting the left eye down just a bit to match the right eye, and maybeeee make the mouth a tiny bit smaller? I think it's okay though
I believe your places of improvement needed are proportions, work on those and you'll be on your way!
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