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by spooks. » Tue Oct 04, 2016 3:09 pm
XxAngelPotato wrote:Its better than your old one, must admit you improved.
Thank you! I really appreciate when people acknowledge my improvement. ^-^
Also, if anyone has any polite critique for me, feel free to post it here.
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by Guest » Thu Oct 20, 2016 1:29 pm
This looks amazing, you improved a lot! It's awesome how we can see how much someone's art changed over the years by looking at 2 versions of the same drawing ^-^
I'd like to suggest you a small change in the hair to make it a bit more realistic... Maybe you could separate it into some locks at least on the tips like on the exemple below (not made by me, I took it from google just to show kind of what I was thinking)

Ps: I'm not an artist so I might be saying something stupid, sorry about that ;-;
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