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Remake by spooks.

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Artist spooks. [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 41 minutes
Drawing sessions 8
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Remake

Postby spooks. » Tue Oct 04, 2016 1:01 pm

    Whoo Hoo i remade one of my old crappy drawings.

    what do you guys think?
Last edited by spooks. on Wed Oct 05, 2016 4:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Remake

Postby tapka » Tue Oct 04, 2016 1:35 pm

Its better than your old one, must admit you improved.
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Re: Remake

Postby spooks. » Tue Oct 04, 2016 3:09 pm

XxAngelPotato wrote:Its better than your old one, must admit you improved.


    Thank you! I really appreciate when people acknowledge my improvement. ^-^


    Also, if anyone has any polite critique for me, feel free to post it here.
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Re: Remake

Postby spooks. » Wed Oct 05, 2016 10:24 am

    bump
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Re: Remake

Postby Guest » Thu Oct 20, 2016 1:29 pm

This looks amazing, you improved a lot! It's awesome how we can see how much someone's art changed over the years by looking at 2 versions of the same drawing ^-^

I'd like to suggest you a small change in the hair to make it a bit more realistic... Maybe you could separate it into some locks at least on the tips like on the exemple below (not made by me, I took it from google just to show kind of what I was thinking)

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Ps: I'm not an artist so I might be saying something stupid, sorry about that ;-;
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