[AppaloosaCake]

I got this idea from my friends kitten poster. I also, used it for a ref.

Comments and more is welcome, i worked hard on this ^^
You can also find it on me DA. Link in sig.

Also, i hope this belongs here :D

[Δℓℓιɢαтσя ƨκʏ~]

Oh! this is great work but perhaphs this belongs in beginners? it is fab, I love the way you draw. But maybe start in beginners?

[AppaloosaCake]

Ummm... Lets see... You didnt even offer any crit. so there was no point of saying that. Also, if you check my art i have about 100pages of art from intermediate and Beginner ^_^

[two.stride]

1. Maybe they don't really know how to give crit, which is why they didn't, or because they thought you might not want it which believe it or not some people don't. 2. My crit is: I think their heads are a bit squished somehow. The one on the bottom's head is a bit too flat, and the one on top is a bit too... oblong. XD I don't know what word to use, so I'll go with that. Also, these are just lines, and most art that stays in Intermediate is at least shaded, or not just a profile, so if you want it to be kept here I would suggest shading, adding their shoulders, coloring, etc. Good job!

[AppaloosaCake]

1. Maybe they don't really know how to give crit, which is why they didn't, or because they thought you might not want it which believe it or not some people don't. 2. My crit is: I think their heads are a bit squished somehow. The one on the bottom's head is a bit too flat, and the one on top is a bit too... oblong. XD I don't know what word to use, so I'll go with that. Also, these are just lines, and most art that stays in Intermediate is at least shaded, or not just a profile, so if you want it to be kept here I would suggest shading, adding their shoulders, coloring, etc. Good job! :thumbup:

Oh yes, i was just letting them know they should offer some. ^^
Oh yes, i am not finished :P well.. not COMPLEATLY finished :)

[↫mars↬]

1. Maybe they don't really know how to give crit, which is why they didn't, or because they thought you might not want it which believe it or not some people don't. 2. My crit is: I think their heads are a bit squished somehow. The one on the bottom's head is a bit too flat, and the one on top is a bit too... oblong. XD I don't know what word to use, so I'll go with that. Also, these are just lines, and most art that stays in Intermediate is at least shaded, or not just a profile, so if you want it to be kept here I would suggest shading, adding their shoulders, coloring, etc. Good job!

I agree with Palamio Sky. Maybie some shadeing and color and then your GOLD! I can't wait to see it done.

[AppaloosaCake]

1. Maybe they don't really know how to give crit, which is why they didn't, or because they thought you might not want it which believe it or not some people don't. 2. My crit is: I think their heads are a bit squished somehow. The one on the bottom's head is a bit too flat, and the one on top is a bit too... oblong. XD I don't know what word to use, so I'll go with that. Also, these are just lines, and most art that stays in Intermediate is at least shaded, or not just a profile, so if you want it to be kept here I would suggest shading, adding their shoulders, coloring, etc. Good job! :thumbup:

I agree with Palamio Sky. Maybie some shadeing and color and then your GOLD! :D I can't wait to see it done.

Well, Thank you! :3 I added some fur, but i am not finished :)