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Style help/Redline? -Read description first- |OUTDATED| by ~HєуRєι~

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Style help/Redline? -Read description first- |OUTDATED|

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Sun May 01, 2016 12:55 pm

I wish for my style to become more realistic but I also need some help with some of the circled aspects in the picture.
PLEASE DO NOT COLOR THIS IN!!!

Problems I'm having:
-the muzzle seems too small to me but that might just be me
-the paws look too... odd. idk, there just seems to be something about them I don't like (I need a new way of drawing paws)
-the shoulders always look too skinny, along with the front fore-legs
-I constantly seem to change the way I do the inside of the ear fluff

Please don't just link me to 'how to draw' tutorials, I realize there are many out there but I want some genuine opinions and suggestions.
Also, if you know any tips or tricks to make my style look at least a little more realistic, I would totally appreciate it! <3
(also, ignore the tale. I was being lazy with it)
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« Hello! My name is Rei, I'm a chronically ill and neurodivergent artist
and designer. I've been on CS since 2012 and am generally friendly if
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Re: Style help/Redline? -Read description first-

Postby Larkspur1678 » Sun May 01, 2016 3:02 pm

Redlined ^^
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Re: Style help/Redline? -Read description first-

Postby друг » Sun May 01, 2016 9:25 pm

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Re: Style help/Redline? -Read description first-

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Mon May 02, 2016 4:00 am

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« Hello! My name is Rei, I'm a chronically ill and neurodivergent artist
and designer. I've been on CS since 2012 and am generally friendly if
a bit intimidated by strangers. My commissions are also open! I am
most active on discord so please contact me there under the
user HeyRei if you need anything! »

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Re: Style help/Redline? -Read description first-

Postby Ritatalia » Mon May 02, 2016 7:51 am

I will help! <3 Developing a good anatomy is not easy and it takes so much practice. Giving you tips will help but once you draw more you realize that you will need more than tips. You need to observe videos and photos to get a great idea. :)
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Re: Style help/Redline? -Read description first-

Postby wolfspirit2249 » Wed May 04, 2016 12:22 pm

Here are some tips (for the paws I don't have style help, but realistic help): for the muzzle, make it a bit longer (female snouts are longer than males, just a little FYI), this might help with shoulders, make the body a bit longer and chest broader, and for paws make them a little bit bigger :)


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