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So... Yeah... by .r a y n e d r o p.

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So... Yeah...

Postby .r a y n e d r o p. » Thu Oct 21, 2010 9:37 am

...I'm not the best artist in the world. I do better on paper, honestly. :P
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Re: So... Yeah...

Postby Ryuu » Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:10 am

I like the outlines here~ Seems fluffy :) The face is expressive, which the colour adds to.
Realism is hard |D I'd suggest trying out a couple tutorials and using reference photos, if you don't already :)
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Postby .r a y n e d r o p. » Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:07 am

Thanks, Ryuu, I'll bear that in mind. X3 Yes, realism is hard. I spend most of my free time practising, but I never get it right.

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Re: So... Yeah...

Postby Aurore » Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:39 am

This looks really good, but you have a few anatomical errors. First, the area from the forehead to the snout isn't so abrupt. It's really smooth. Second, the fur on the neck isn't flat, it kinda sticks out. And the head should be bigger. Look at pictures and videos of wolves to help you understand their anatomy, proportions, the shapes of their body/head/etc, and how they move. :3
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Re: So... Yeah...

Postby .r a y n e d r o p. » Mon Oct 25, 2010 6:10 am

Yeah, that's what bothers me. :P I've done something a bit better on paper, though-
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I can't do full realism, but I'm pretty pleased with this one. I think the muzzle needs to be a bit thinner, too.
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