My first official drawing on Oekaki 83 It's crap and looks just plain horrible, and I didn't even get to shade to highlight it properly so I'll probably have to go in later and fix that.
Constructive crits are good ^^
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First Doddle by ⚜ Estivel
| Artist | ⚜ Estivel [gallery] |
| Time spent | 2 hours, 48 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 7 |
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First Doddle
by ⚜ Estivel » Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:54 pm
So I could fly away.
Where fun isn’t worn,
Nor people do mourn,
This is where dreams are born.
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And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
I long to have a unicorn,
So I could learn to fly,
Yet dreams hold scorn
. . . . . .For hopes highborn,
. . . . . .And unicorns yet to fly.
we are NOT holibombers, but we will sometimes give gifts
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Re: First Doddle
by Indiel » Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:01 pm
Wow this is an awesome picture! 
I hope to see more artwork from you in the future
I hope to see more artwork from you in the future
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Re: First Doddle
by ⚜ Estivel » Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:13 pm
Edited it to include a body, as well as a background that's sure to come eventually ^^
So I could fly away.
Where fun isn’t worn,
Nor people do mourn,
This is where dreams are born.
⚜ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ⚜
And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
I long to have a unicorn,
So I could learn to fly,
Yet dreams hold scorn
. . . . . .For hopes highborn,
. . . . . .And unicorns yet to fly.
we are NOT holibombers, but we will sometimes give gifts
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Re: First Doddle
by iPawki » Sat Nov 13, 2010 6:59 pm
You're a very good artist. ^-^ Just one thing, I feel as though the chest is a little too small compared to the head... though other than that, its perfect.
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Re: First Doddle
by ⚜ Estivel » Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:27 am
~ Daydreamer ~ wrote:You're a very good artist. ^-^ Just one thing, I feel as though the chest is a little too small compared to the head... though other than that, its perfect.
Now that you mention it, it does look a bit small ^^ I'll try to fix it once I get back from school; thanks for the advice! C:
So I could fly away.
Where fun isn’t worn,
Nor people do mourn,
This is where dreams are born.
⚜ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ⚜
And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
And if there was a place like this,
Would not it be quite grand?
To jump and play in fevered bliss,
Where no one can just stand?
I long to have a unicorn,
So I could learn to fly,
Yet dreams hold scorn
. . . . . .For hopes highborn,
. . . . . .And unicorns yet to fly.
we are NOT holibombers, but we will sometimes give gifts
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