[Aura]

My third oekaki, and my second one in this style.
I used watercolour and then pen. It is meant to be sketchy, and while I can be precise and stuff, I felt like sketchy today.
My first one, if anyone would like to see it, is called Grey Day.
Yeah, I'm sloppy enough to not do a background for this - I think its fine on its own. Might edit it later. Its a bit sloppy, but sadly the timer is not lying in this one.

[Prince of Awesome]

I LOVE IT OMG AHHHHH

[Aura]

I LOVE IT OMG AHHHHH

Why thanks! Any critique? :3

[Oddly Shaded]

this is really good.

Critique (only cuz you asked )

You should curve your lines a bit more to help the shape form, and add lighter lines to make it seem like the light is touching it.

[Aura]

Thanks for critique-ing!
I guess so. Imma not very good with curvy lines cos my tablet hates it. XD I'll try though.

[Kirimi]

that's the point of sketching i guess XD

[Aura]

*glomps Kir*

[berdsbrother]

I think you captured the grace and curvature of a rose perfectly.
Great work C:

[Aura]

Wow, thanks!
O.o

[Aura]

*waves* Any more critique?