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HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Soph6297 » Sat Aug 22, 2015 8:45 am

Heavy storms have been raged all around the world making life hard for everybody, on land and underwater. These stormes which are caused by the massive heat due the summer have drifted several animals and Guardians to locations near us. Those Guardians are different though, something we have never seen before. They have a different appearance and behave different. They are "Gods".
Or at least thats what they call themselves. We, the mortals, call them self-proclaimed Gods because to be honest, they are none. But don't tell them, they won't listen anyways. Each "God" features a theme they are the "God" of. To do justice to the theme they represent these Otherworldy Guardians have collected several things they show off on theirselves.

Will you be able to win one of the self-proclaimed Gods heart?


- Self-Proclaimed God of the Seven Seas -

Note; Please note that these Guardians are themed GoS and therefore cannot breed with other Guardians of the same theme. And anyways, those Guardians are too vain to believe in any other Gods than themself.


With this Guardian posted, the Summer Event comes to an end - thanks for all who took part in it! <3
This lady sure took a long journey. As you might have noticed she is a HGoS, based on a Clownfish, hope thats obvious x3

In order to win this last "Godness" you need to tell me her thoughts of the journey she took or she was part in, even she did not want it (remember the storms being the cause for these Gods to brought to us!). Tell me how or what she experienced her journey (max. of 500 words).
Pretty up your form is alright.


klovesugar2 wrote:
Username: klovesugar2
Name: Feriae
Name Meaning: A day dedicated to the gods.
Gender: Mare
Age: 21 years
Story:
Blinded by wind and sheltered by storm,
The kind of being in which chaos is born.
Heed not the ocean's sweet calling,
For fear of the men's terrified bawling,
Helpless and hapless in the sea's cruel tide,
Never stray from the path lest ye' turn blind,
As few ever dare into the Kelpie's dark lair-
Long ago lost to the harsh seas of time.

Yet she undeterred would soon venture forth,
Following tales of terror to the farthest north.
Dark waters trailing a long ruby ribbon,
His sins far from being forgiven.

He had killed them in his wrath,
Leaving a bloody path.
Her mother,
Her brother,
Her father,
His daughter-
Whom was left to mourn.
Her heart just as dead,
As the seas bled so red,
She was left to weep.

Yet none would block his path,
Just watching the bloodbath.
Nothing but a villain!
He delighted in the killing,
Leaving a bloodstained trail.
Leaving hearts to wail.

So her own sorrow shoved aside,
She looked and found her fins were tied,
She could never ignore their cries for help.
She'd never hide like a foal in the kelp!
How could she turn a blind eye,
When even more would die?

"No, no." Her heart rang clear,
"No more." She said for all to hear,
So thus began her journey-
The fates had deemed her worthy.
Down garnet paths she swam,
And her epic tale began.

Which brings us to now as the dark waters churned,
All comforts of home having long since been spurned,
The stormy seas raged as thunder so roared,
White lightning eyes flashed as an insulted lord,
Yet she couldn't care less as steel found her gaze,
Swimming, and swimming, past all the towns razed.
He needed to be stopped, before anymore was lost,
Though the price of his life was one hefty cost,
It was a price she was willing to pay.

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who would she be, when all's said and done?
Who would she be, once the battle was won?

The weather grew worse as hurricanes stirred,
Red ribbon's path becoming ever more blurred,
It howled, it snarled, and it tossed her asunder,
Biting and lashing to the beat of wild thunder,
It sent her up high, it beat her down low,
Yet still she fought for in her heart she did know,
That to yield was to end it, and that would be all,
Nothing remembered of a great hero's fall.

But this wasn't something any mortal could do,
Even a guardian had limits, she knew,
Yet still she struggled with a powerful tail,
Waging a war against these ungodly gales,
Days slipping by, nights slipping past,
In moments she thought were surely her last-
It all finally stilled as she broke from her cage,
A lone figure screaming in outrage,
A phantasmal king long ago lost,
She'd won, but at what cost?

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who was she, now that all's said and done?
Who was she, now that the battle was won?

She, the victor,
She, the queen.
She, the savior,
She, the dream.
Protecting those who couldn't themselves,
Weathering the storm, to find she excelled,
Seeing their suffering, she ended their plight,
Who they prayed to now, in the dark night.

A goddess, no doubt.

[size=50](Poem is 499 words, attempted to write it as though an epic, like the Odyssey, only realized the word limit and had to trim it.)

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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Astraela » Sun Aug 23, 2015 12:10 am

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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby OutdatedBoombox » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:34 am

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Name: Amphiprion
Name Meaning: a lower classification for the clownfish
Gender: Mare
Age: 24
Story: Amphiprion woke to the sound of waves crashing and the water roaring over her head. She was thrown about by the tempestuous waves and knocked her head on a rock. Dazed, the mare realized she was being swept away from her coral home by the storm and she cried out to her 'disciples' a small hoard of clownfish who worshipped her as their goddess and protector. The fish stayed in their anemone, wanting but unable to fight against the storm. Amphiprion was devastated. That's the last thing she remembered. The lovely mare woke adrift in the open seas, far from her home, the storm having swept her hundreds of miles out. She lazily swirled her tail as she regained consciousness. The clear sunlight filtered through the water from the surfact about ten feet above, causing the mare to squint. {How long have I been out..?} she wondered, the thought swirling through her aching head. A small thing nuzzled under one of her fins and she peeked at it. A tiny clownfish, a juvenile, had been sheltering in her mane when they'd been swept out, and was now worriedly snuggling and fluttering against her tail. "There there." she soothed the little one with a soft bubble as she looked about.

The ocean was desolate, a pod of humpback whales the only sign of life aside from herself and the little clownfish. The strange pair, goddess and child, approached the massive beasts with apprehension at first, then joy when they were welcomed. The whales were on their way to the arctic with their calves to feed and let their young grow. Amphiprion and her companion traveled with these gentle giants until another storm hit. The goddess pinned her disciple under her fin as they were tossed about and dragged away from their companions. The mare decided then and there that she'd never be separated from the tiny fish who had been through so much with her. They were thrown from a wave and blacked out upon hitting the water...

The goddess woke again to a little wriggling under her fin. She let the small fish out and realized they were in a kelp forest. She saw some shells and began to gather them, using them to weave a headdress and necklace for herself from the kelp. The pair began traveling again after that. Amphiprion became tangled in a fine fishing net somewhere of the coast of rural Thailand, but the fisherman cut her free, resulting in a free flowing cape. The third, and final storm came exactly one month after she was cut free, and it swept her to the Caribbean. There she met other GoS, the first of her kind she’d ever seen aside from herself. She claimed to be the ‘Goddess of the Seven Seas’ and began to recount her travels, saying it was fate while her companion fluttered and swam circles about her head like a living halo.
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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Fuscontidox » Wed Aug 26, 2015 11:03 pm

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Name: Naunet
Name Meaning: Egyptian Mythical goddess of the ocean
Gender: Mare
Age: 73
Story:

As a self proclaimed Goddess, Nanuet had always led others to believe that she controlled the waters, she was wise, and beautiful, whilst knowing that there weren't very many around her who were smart enough to deny her claims. She would preform miraculous tricks such as making whirl pools, and heavy gusts. But the one thing she knew, was her ability to sense the weather above the water, the place in which she resided was deep waters, often filled with glowing creatures and other strange things. She fit perfectly into the environment because of her dark coat, despite being marked with her Hybrid half. Sea life that worshipped her from higher water levels would adorn her with a new item as a sign of love and value when she would travel to higher levels dying full moons.

The smell of the coming storm was one she had never known before, and Nanuet nee it was passed the full moon, going back up now would make it obvious that something was wrong. So she ignored the dysfunctional scent for a time, unsure what to do about it, after a day or two of ignoring the storm, she began to feel drowsy and at the same time a head ache approached her. Something about this storm was different, much different, a cold shill ran through her tail and she knew she had to climb to the surface. Lifting her weighted gaze, she took off with powerful strides towards the upper waters. As she neared the surface, the sea life that bustled about watched her curiously and attempted to follow her as she


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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Bayfire213 » Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:51 pm

(I couldn't resist, this little lady is absolutely stunning~ Those blue eyes and markings on that black base... Not to mention that tail... *shakes head with a grin* You did a wonderful job Soph. If I don't get her, I don't suppose I could request a breeding from whoever does? I'd be glad to offer up a slot or two from any of mine in return.)

Username: klovesugar2
Name: Feriae
Name Meaning: A day dedicated to the gods.
Gender: Mare
Age: 21 years
Story:
Blinded by wind and sheltered by storm,
The kind of being in which chaos is born.
Heed not the ocean's sweet calling,
For fear of the men's terrified bawling,
Helpless and hapless in the sea's cruel tide,
Never stray from the path lest ye' turn blind,
As few ever dare into the Kelpie's dark lair-
Long ago lost to the harsh seas of time.

Yet she undeterred would soon venture forth,
Following tales of terror to the farthest north.
Dark waters trailing a long ruby ribbon,
His sins far from being forgiven.

He had killed them in his wrath,
Leaving a bloody path.
Her mother,
Her brother,
Her father,
His daughter-
Whom was left to mourn.
Her heart just as dead,
As the seas bled so red,
She was left to weep.

Yet none would block his path,
Just watching the bloodbath.
Nothing but a villain!
He delighted in the killing,
Leaving a bloodstained trail.
Leaving hearts to wail.

So her own sorrow shoved aside,
She looked and found her fins were tied,
She could never ignore their cries for help.
She'd never hide like a foal in the kelp!
How could she turn a blind eye,
When even more would die?

"No, no." Her heart rang clear,
"No more." She said for all to hear,
So thus began her journey-
The fates had deemed her worthy.
Down garnet paths she swam,
And her epic tale began.

Which brings us to now as the dark waters churned,
All comforts of home having long since been spurned,
The stormy seas raged as thunder so roared,
White lightning eyes flashed as an insulted lord,
Yet she couldn't care less as steel found her gaze,
Swimming, and swimming, past all the towns razed.
He needed to be stopped, before anymore was lost,
Though the price of his life was one hefty cost,
It was a price she was willing to pay.

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who would she be, when all's said and done?
Who would she be, once the battle was won?

The weather grew worse as hurricanes stirred,
Red ribbon's path becoming ever more blurred,
It howled, it snarled, and it tossed her asunder,
Biting and lashing to the beat of wild thunder,
It sent her up high, it beat her down low,
Yet still she fought for in her heart she did know,
That to yield was to end it, and that would be all,
Nothing remembered of a great hero's fall.

But this wasn't something any mortal could do,
Even a guardian had limits, she knew,
Yet still she struggled with a powerful tail,
Waging a war against these ungodly gales,
Days slipping by, nights slipping past,
In moments she thought were surely her last-
It all finally stilled as she broke from her cage,
A lone figure screaming in outrage,
A phantasmal king long ago lost,
She'd won, but at what cost?

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who was she, now that all's said and done?
Who was she, now that the battle was won?

She, the victor,
She, the queen.
She, the savior,
She, the dream.
Protecting those who couldn't themselves,
Weathering the storm, to find she excelled,
Seeing their suffering, she ended their plight,
Who they prayed to now, in the dark night.

A goddess, no doubt.

(Poem is 499 words, attempted to write it as though an epic, like the Odyssey, only realized the word limit and had to trim it.)

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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Soph6297 » Thu Sep 10, 2015 3:58 am

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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Bayfire213 » Wed Sep 23, 2015 12:13 am

*hesitantly starts skipping stones across the still waters, peering into the dusken depths* Um, hello..? Not wanting to be a bother, but I don't want this pretty girl to be forgotten, and my fickle mind is causing me to fret. *offers a sheepish grin, before nervously biting lip* So, um, hello..?
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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby OutdatedBoombox » Wed Sep 23, 2015 12:40 am

klovesugar2 wrote:*hesitantly starts skipping stones across the still waters, peering into the dusken depths* Um, hello..? Not wanting to be a bother, but I don't want this pretty girl to be forgotten, and my fickle mind is causing me to fret. *offers a sheepish grin, before nervously biting lip* So, um, hello..?



Soph is having a hard time judging her, please be patient. I asked her about it earlier. :3
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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Bayfire213 » Wed Sep 23, 2015 2:35 am

Alright~ I'm fine with waiting, it's just that I've seen a fair few adoptables forgotten now that school's started, and considering all the time and effort put into this girl, and how beautifully she turned out... Better safe than sorry..? I figured it was probably something along those lines, or life in general, which is why it took me until now to voice my concerns, however without an actual confirmation, my mind has far too much wiggle room. So thank you kindly for allaying my fears, Chibi~Predator, it's much appreciated.
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Re: HGoS #331 - Black

Postby Soph6297 » Thu Sep 24, 2015 3:33 am

klovesugar2 wrote:(I couldn't resist, this little lady is absolutely stunning~ Those blue eyes and markings on that black base... Not to mention that tail... *shakes head with a grin* You did a wonderful job Soph. If I don't get her, I don't suppose I could request a breeding from whoever does? I'd be glad to offer up a slot or two from any of mine in return.)

Username: klovesugar2
Name: Feriae
Name Meaning: A day dedicated to the gods.
Gender: Mare
Age: 21 years
Story:
Blinded by wind and sheltered by storm,
The kind of being in which chaos is born.
Heed not the ocean's sweet calling,
For fear of the men's terrified bawling,
Helpless and hapless in the sea's cruel tide,
Never stray from the path lest ye' turn blind,
As few ever dare into the Kelpie's dark lair-
Long ago lost to the harsh seas of time.

Yet she undeterred would soon venture forth,
Following tales of terror to the farthest north.
Dark waters trailing a long ruby ribbon,
His sins far from being forgiven.

He had killed them in his wrath,
Leaving a bloody path.
Her mother,
Her brother,
Her father,
His daughter-
Whom was left to mourn.
Her heart just as dead,
As the seas bled so red,
She was left to weep.

Yet none would block his path,
Just watching the bloodbath.
Nothing but a villain!
He delighted in the killing,
Leaving a bloodstained trail.
Leaving hearts to wail.

So her own sorrow shoved aside,
She looked and found her fins were tied,
She could never ignore their cries for help.
She'd never hide like a foal in the kelp!
How could she turn a blind eye,
When even more would die?

"No, no." Her heart rang clear,
"No more." She said for all to hear,
So thus began her journey-
The fates had deemed her worthy.
Down garnet paths she swam,
And her epic tale began.

Which brings us to now as the dark waters churned,
All comforts of home having long since been spurned,
The stormy seas raged as thunder so roared,
White lightning eyes flashed as an insulted lord,
Yet she couldn't care less as steel found her gaze,
Swimming, and swimming, past all the towns razed.
He needed to be stopped, before anymore was lost,
Though the price of his life was one hefty cost,
It was a price she was willing to pay.

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who would she be, when all's said and done?
Who would she be, once the battle was won?

The weather grew worse as hurricanes stirred,
Red ribbon's path becoming ever more blurred,
It howled, it snarled, and it tossed her asunder,
Biting and lashing to the beat of wild thunder,
It sent her up high, it beat her down low,
Yet still she fought for in her heart she did know,
That to yield was to end it, and that would be all,
Nothing remembered of a great hero's fall.

But this wasn't something any mortal could do,
Even a guardian had limits, she knew,
Yet still she struggled with a powerful tail,
Waging a war against these ungodly gales,
Days slipping by, nights slipping past,
In moments she thought were surely her last-
It all finally stilled as she broke from her cage,
A lone figure screaming in outrage,
A phantasmal king long ago lost,
She'd won, but at what cost?

For what was the victor who defeated the king?
Who was the savior of whom the bard's sing?
Who was she, now that all's said and done?
Who was she, now that the battle was won?

She, the victor,
She, the queen.
She, the savior,
She, the dream.
Protecting those who couldn't themselves,
Weathering the storm, to find she excelled,
Seeing their suffering, she ended their plight,
Who they prayed to now, in the dark night.

A goddess, no doubt.

(Poem is 499 words, attempted to write it as though an epic, like the Odyssey, only realized the word limit and had to trim it.)

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Ok so as its already been told I had a hard time judging this girl and so I took the helping hand of a dear friend to finally get this lady judged. And here it his, finally judged!
The fact that klovesugar won her in the end was the interesting but yet nice rhymed poem which kept the reader interested in the story. Nevertheless kudus also to Chibi~Predator for the story! As I said I probably would still be stuck with making my final decision if I havent got help.
Great job guys and congrats!
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