[Aura]

Err... well, I first did watercolour and then I did pen. Yeah, I know its not the best, especially since I went to get a cookie in the middle of it, so the timer is about a few minutes off. XD
This is my... second oekaki or something apart from coloured in edits. So I was pretty much messing about with the brushes. The 'grass' is not grass, I was thinking of my aloe vera plant at the time, so it turned out into mutant stalks of non-prickly aloe vera leaf sticking out of the earth.
So yeah. Comments and constructive criticism is much appreciated!

[rahleigh]

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G is all i cna say, that is really good! REally your second oekakie- WOW!

[Aura]

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G is all i cna say, that is really good! REally your second oekakie- WOW!

Wow thanks! Any criticism? I need some. XD

[rahleigh]

Maybe try to add a backgrond or litteler peices of grass, other wise it is really really good!

[Aura]

Well, its not meant to be grass...
Background. KnewI forgot something.

[rahleigh]

Yeah, not grass, I meant more aloe vera! The background would just look good as a blue sky and two clouds!

[Aura]

Hmm, I guess. Thanks for critique! *hugs*

[Graysen]

Beautiful! C:
The only thing I can think of suggesting would be making the yellow slightly easier to see somehow. Whether that would mean more aloe vera grass or a blue sky would be up to you.
I love your sketcheh style! ^^

[kee;]

that is an AMAZING drawing.

[mudkiip]

Awesome!:D