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WIP ~ feedback? by Sandy Hoofprints

Artist Sandy Hoofprints [gallery]
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WIP ~ feedback?

Postby Sandy Hoofprints » Tue May 12, 2015 10:57 pm

SERIOUS WIP...
To do:
~ Eyes
~ Ears
~ Hair(both horse and WME?)
~ Colour (alpha lock)
~ *Possibly shading?
~ *Possibly separate so each can be done indivuadually?


This will eventually be an entry for a WME, and if it is good I might turn it into an editable and/or gift lines
It would be cool if you could give me constructive criticism or feedback. What do you think of the noses and eye???
Last edited by Sandy Hoofprints on Thu May 14, 2015 2:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: WIP ~ feedback?

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Wed May 13, 2015 2:00 am

I think its very good!
(like I know anything about drawing horses)
But it looks fairly correct
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Re: WIP ~ feedback?

Postby Sandy Hoofprints » Thu May 14, 2015 2:59 am

Thank you so much :mrgreen:
I made an editable!
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Re: WIP ~ feedback?

Postby cecelia. » Thu May 14, 2015 6:30 am

I like it ^^

I think the jaw lines are a bit wide {i dunno} for something that looks like a horse, but overall, looks good ^^
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Re: WIP ~ feedback?

Postby Sandy Hoofprints » Sat Jun 06, 2015 9:46 am

thanks for the advice *notes down precious feedback*
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