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redline? by a snoozing skerple

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redline?

Postby a snoozing skerple » Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:30 pm

so i don't know you and this is crazy, but this doesn't really look right so redline it maybe?
yes, lame pun. i know. but in any case, there's something wrong with this critter. fixes/advice would be much appreciated.
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Re: redline?

Postby WolfTheHuman » Wed Apr 22, 2015 8:19 pm

The nose needs too be thinner :3
But that is nit picking and it might just be stylised hehe
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Re: redline?

Postby ghostvvinz » Thu Apr 23, 2015 1:01 am

I think it looks fine! Are you looking towards making it a species?
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Re: redline?

Postby Larkspur1678 » Thu Apr 23, 2015 6:13 am

I'll redline this when I get home ^^
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Re: redline?

Postby a snoozing skerple » Thu Apr 23, 2015 7:44 am

WolfTheHuman wrote:The nose needs too be thinner :3
But that is nit picking and it might just be stylised hehe

not really stylized as more of a ragequit actually :/ edited though

its_souleh wrote:I think it looks fine! Are you looking towards making it a species?

noo.. it's just supposed to be a regular wolf.
that it looks different enough from a canine that it could pass as its own species is probably a sign that 'fine it's not quite.
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