[Alice's Rose]

omg, this took me a while to get it all right, and i think it's the best i've done so far!
please comment/critique, and I hope y'all like it!

(this is one of my characters mased on a book i'm writing. her name is Merodi, meaning melody in japanese)

[noel.]

Hmmm..the lines are a bit different, you didn't use smooth as usual? =3
Anyways you might want to make a small ine for the nose (I realize her hair might be covering it, but it kinda looks weird without it.)

And you might want to make the lines a bit neater, they seem a bit blury, what size did you use? Oher than those small details it's great!

[Alice's Rose]

thank you!
Yeah, i decided to try not smooth lines, but i think i'm gonna go back at make it smooth. the hair was originally covering the nose, but i'll probably add that in too. ^_^

as usual, any more comments/critiques are welcome.

EDIT: okay, I edited it slightly, by adding a nose. ^_^ I tried making the lines smooth, but i just didn't really like the look of it. I think i might edit it some more tomorrow by outlining her in purple. any thoughts on this idea?