She looks fine Drizz, and I'm glad you put a colour chart (shows me that you can do them :3). I feel like maybe her eel stripe over her back could be smoother, along with the colour transition in the mane and tail, but I love her barring and the way her coat colours contrast <3 The only thing is in the genotypes, for colour and horn type.
Because one of the ponies in the couple is flaxen, the foal would be a carrier, so Ff would be added to the colour genotype (flaxen only shows when homozygous on red pigment, and recessive genes are shown with lowercase letters)
In the horn type, she would be a carrier for Chamois or Dall, not both :3 They're both equally likely - only stallions can carry 3 different horn type genes, and that's only if Kudu is present.
Hope this is helpful