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park. [gallery] |
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2 hours, 23 minutes |
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3 |
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by park. » Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:49 am
What should I fix? First anime drawing without a reference picture.
I feel as though his chin is too big. Or maybe my background too plain. His eye placement is off too right? It has to be the dirt. They look like weird growths. Is the blood too much? If so I can change it so sorry. The eyebrow is small too... Maybe I should have worked harder on the ear.
Does this even look like a boy!?!?! Ugghhhh sadly, the timer is true...
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by Rosiestar » Mon Jan 05, 2015 4:42 pm
This looks amazing! I think you did perfectly for a picture without a reference! I know what it's like to look at art from the "artist's view" and just think that a ton of things that you've done are wrong but in my position (the viewer's view) it looks absoltely wonderful <333
I talk to much
oh well XD
Seriously though, this is amazing <3

Rosie ♡
rip, my darling girl
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by GhoulishDes » Wed Jul 22, 2015 4:01 pm
I think this looks amazing. Don't be so down on yourself! There are probably lots of people who wish they could draw like you! Some constructive criticism is always good, but there is a difference between constructive criticism and just criticism.
I love this piece of art, its much better than I could go without a ref.
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by GhoulishDes » Wed Aug 05, 2015 4:10 am
sasukeuchiha. wrote:Thanks so much guys. Man, this is so old. I just want to scribble it and have it forgotten XD.
I should do a remake!
@DestructionIsHere - Your signature is awesome. I love Gerard and Mikey Way c:
Thank you! Its been a while since I met a fellow killjoy. C:
I would love to see a remake!
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