[veckster]

Tips? Critique? Comments? REDLINE?

Hello ^^ I decided to sketch this up, using all the information I got from my LAST redline, and combined all the results ^^ I am quite satisfied on how this turned out (; However, I am still wanting to improve. Can I have anymore redlines, tips, critiques, comments, etc? Thanks in advance (:

Note- If you redline, and have any advice for drawing arms, please tell me! I struggle with arms so I just put them behind her back xP

[I♫dream♪in♬harmonies]

I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

[veckster]

I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

Thanks ^^ Yea, I kinda rushed on the legs, I struggled with them for about 20 minutes T-T Thanks for the tips :'D If you'd like to redline, (not to sound pushy or anything haha) I can add you :3

[fanta]

If you want, I could redline for you.^^
My java's been acting up, but I've done much better before than in my gallery.

[mitsurugi]

may i be added? i'll redline it for you as soon as i get my work done xD

[Running Fern]

Hi! I'd be willing to do a redline for you! Love the drawing it has a lot of character to it!
As for tips/critique I would say make her rib cage area a little wider, and her thighs a bit thicker.

[veckster]

If you want, I could redline for you.^^
My java's been acting up, but I've done much better before than in my gallery.

Added your name ^^

[veckster]

may i be added? i'll redline it for you as soon as i get my work done xD

Yea you can XD Added you :3 BTW lovely picture XD

[veckster]

Hi! I'd be willing to do a redline for you! Love the drawing it has a lot of character to it!
As for tips/critique I would say make her rib cage area a little wider, and her thighs a bit thicker.

Sure :3 Added you :'D You may start as soon as you can :3

[johnny dude]

Could you add me? I'm totally willing to redline if you want :3