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My gallery · by **veckster** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:18 am

Tips? Critique? Comments? REDLINE?

Hello ^^ I decided to sketch this up, using all the information I got from my LAST redline, and combined all the results ^^ I am quite satisfied on how this turned out (; However, I am still wanting to improve. Can I have anymore redlines, tips, critiques, comments, etc? Thanks in advance (:

Note- If you redline, and have any advice for drawing arms, please tell me! I struggle with arms so I just put them behind her back xP

My gallery · by **I♫dream♪in♬harmonies** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:19 am

I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course

Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

My gallery · by **veckster** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:23 am

Bromine wrote:I love it! The only thing I would say is that I typically draw the hair all going down, so the little pieces that are separate would be pointing down rather than up. That's simply a matter of style and opinion, of course Also, maybe vary the leg thickness a bit? Again, i love the drawing!

Thanks ^^ Yea, I kinda rushed on the legs, I struggled with them for about 20 minutes T-T Thanks for the tips :'D If you'd like to redline, (not to sound pushy or anything haha) I can add you :3

My gallery · by **fanta** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:26 am

If you want, I could redline for you.^^
My java's been acting up, but I've done much better before than in my gallery.

My gallery · by **mitsurugi** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:34 am

may i be added? i'll redline it for you as soon as i get my work done xD

My gallery · by **Running Fern** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:37 am

Hi! I'd be willing to do a redline for you! Love the drawing it has a lot of character to it!
As for tips/critique I would say make her rib cage area a little wider, and her thighs a bit thicker.

My gallery · by **veckster** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:47 am

Kitten and Sparrow wrote:If you want, I could redline for you.^^
My java's been acting up, but I've done much better before than in my gallery.

Added your name ^^

My gallery · by **veckster** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:47 am

WowFace wrote:may i be added? i'll redline it for you as soon as i get my work done xD

Yea you can XD Added you :3 BTW lovely picture XD

My gallery · by **veckster** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:49 am

✝ Jesus Freak ✝ wrote:Hi! I'd be willing to do a redline for you! Love the drawing it has a lot of character to it!
As for tips/critique I would say make her rib cage area a little wider, and her thighs a bit thicker.

Sure :3 Added you :'D You may start as soon as you can :3

My gallery · by **johnny dude** » Wed Oct 29, 2014 11:14 am

Could you add me? I'm totally willing to redline if you want :3

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