[dservizzi]

Im terrible at antanomy so I decided I would practice on my OC Amanda ^w^ I'd like Comments, Critique, and especially Tips ^w^ Thank you!

Edit;; Just took a tip or 2 made it in red pen... not my best but just to give the feel .w. Thank you Ika Wolfe!

Another Edit;; Ive added metonymy to give me redline < 3 Thank you metonymy!

Even more Edits;; Thank you SO much EVERYONE for all of the tips and tricks! I appreciate everything to the MAX! Thank you!>w<

[Viridika]

Depending on what kind of anatomy you're practicing (anime or realistic?) I'm assuming realistic. Broaden the hips. Though there are women who don't have very broad hips, they should be at least slightly wider than the shoulders. And thighs normally touch together. In proportion to the body, the neck is too long. Good work, though. You'll get it down!

[dservizzi]

Depending on what kind of anatomy you're practicing (anime or realistic?) I'm assuming realistic. Broaden the hips. Though there are women who don't have very broad hips, they should be at least slightly wider than the shoulders. And thighs normally touch together. In proportion to the body, the neck is too long. Good work, though. You'll get it down!

Hehe thank you for the tips! < 3 Im going for er... between the 2 styles? ( If that makes sense .-. ) But the tips help aton ^w^ Thank you! < 3

[dservizzi]

Hope I did the edits right c:

[metonymy]

I can give you a redline if you'd like - you're getting things a little off. count by heads, and use them as a guidepoint. a person is about 7 heads tall, and the length from top of head to start of thighs is going to be the same as the length from start of legs to bottom of feet, for instance. you'll get there, i promise, and this is already good practice!

[dservizzi]

I can give you a redline if you'd like - you're getting things a little off. count by heads, and use them as a guidepoint. a person is about 7 heads tall, and the length from top of head to start of thighs is going to be the same as the length from start of legs to bottom of feet, for instance. you'll get there, i promise, and this is already good practice!

Hehe thank you so much for the Critique and Tips! Next time I practice, ill be sure to cound by heads c; And I'd actually really like a redline! ^w^ Ill add you! Thank you so much for the help itll help me so much! < 3