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help please? by The Safe Haven

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help please?

Postby The Safe Haven » Fri Oct 17, 2014 10:43 pm

working on my canines, anyone mined helping me out?
also my shading and highlighting skills on the oekai are not so well, you can post tutorials too if yah want c:
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Re: help please?

Postby ririan » Fri Oct 17, 2014 10:46 pm

This is already very nice <3
but i think you should shorten the neck.
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Re: help please?

Postby The Safe Haven » Fri Oct 17, 2014 10:50 pm

thanks, i'll keep that in mind for my next drawning .3.
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Hello! Call me Haven! I'm a very social easy to talk to person
Lets not forget really just the unexpected basically I geuss
I'm a wild card. Anyhow I love to draw and I always look for
improvement No matter how good it looks. I can be blunt
slightly preppy and cheery. Though I can be a bit of a butt
head and a pain in the arse for some. Did I metion I can be
extremely lazy at what I do. Besides roleplaying I love to play
sports , that's if I get to learn them. Anyways my besties on
Cs are (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥ Ƒυяяιєѕ ♥ , Jackie Boy , and OrigamiXD


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Re: help please?

Postby Rebellionwolf216 » Sat Oct 18, 2014 12:57 am

Shorten the neck a bit. Make sure you think of proportions.
Very nice though.
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Re: help please?

Postby The Safe Haven » Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:17 pm

Oh alright, I got to work on proptions properly thanks c:


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Hello! Call me Haven! I'm a very social easy to talk to person
Lets not forget really just the unexpected basically I geuss
I'm a wild card. Anyhow I love to draw and I always look for
improvement No matter how good it looks. I can be blunt
slightly preppy and cheery. Though I can be a bit of a butt
head and a pain in the arse for some. Did I metion I can be
extremely lazy at what I do. Besides roleplaying I love to play
sports , that's if I get to learn them. Anyways my besties on
Cs are (っ◔◡◔)っ ♥ Ƒυяяιєѕ ♥ , Jackie Boy , and OrigamiXD


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