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practice by flight;;

Artist flight;; [gallery]
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practice

Postby flight;; » Tue Sep 30, 2014 4:18 pm

Just some
more horse practice.
I feel like I have improved some, with the help of redlines, but clearly I still need some work. *cough cough* LEGS *cough cough*

Comments/crit always welcome. cx
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Re: practice

Postby Tynahi » Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:39 pm

You have improved a lot! May I make a few suggestions? The neck looks a little too thin, the bottom of the neck should connect lower so that it looks like it'll flow through with the belly. As it is the shoulder looks out of place because the chest is so shallow. Also the back/further away front leg seems a tad longer than the closer one and bent awkwardly. Hope that helps! Great job!!
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Re: practice

Postby flight;; » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:24 pm

Tynahi wrote:You have improved a lot! May I make a few suggestions? The neck looks a little too thin, the bottom of the neck should connect lower so that it looks like it'll flow through with the belly. As it is the shoulder looks out of place because the chest is so shallow. Also the back/further away front leg seems a tad longer than the closer one and bent awkwardly. Hope that helps! Great job!!


Thank you!!
I will look to touch it up later!
I really appreciate all the help Tynahi <3
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