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My gallery · by **flight;;** » Sat Aug 09, 2014 4:05 pm

Horse sketch
Criticism/critique highly appreciated. <3

My gallery · by **YourGayness** » Sat Aug 09, 2014 4:32 pm

Awesome!

I have a teeny critique though (I hope its ok!) That I think the chest area needs to be a bit broader as well as the neck and the ankle area on the front legs (from the ankle bit to the hoof) a bit shorter (well, the leg longer so he's not lopsided/tilting forward XD)
Otherwise irs really really good!

My gallery · by **Kiwilady** » Mon Aug 11, 2014 7:08 am

I agree and maybe make the face a bit more shally
Ie make the nose a bit more pronounced

My gallery · by **flight;;** » Mon Aug 11, 2014 7:18 am

Thank you both so much for the critique! I can't thank you enough. I need it. cx <3

rainbowfluffyduck wrote:Awesome! :D
I have a teeny critique though (I hope its ok!) That I think the chest area needs to be a bit broader as well as the neck and the ankle area on the front legs (from the ankle bit to the hoof) a bit shorter (well, the leg longer so he's not lopsided/tilting forward XD)
Otherwise irs really really good!

I attempted to fix the chest.
I tried shortening the pastern, but it looked strange with the size of the cannons.

Kiwilady wrote:I agree and maybe make the face a bit more shally
Ie make the nose a bit more pronounced

What do you mean by shally?
As for making the nose more pronounced, do you mean making it larger or like this where the area around the nose is raised?

My gallery · by **flight;;** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:42 am

Would anyone care to redline it?
Pretty please with a cherry on top <3

My gallery · by **Kiwilady** » Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:53 am

I meant more shapely
And more like this
http://lolakeene.deviantart.com/art/Hor ... -340882534

My gallery · by **preppy paws** » Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:25 am

Actually, the nose looks fine. Horses can be all shapes and sizes. No horse is alike. As you can see here, the nose is almost exactly alike as flights. My neighbor has a horse with a similar nose. And it looks perfect. In the picture you have Kiwilady, it isnt a accurate picture. The way they placed the lips is all wrong, and it effects the nostril being to high up.
I can try to redline this for you flight, if you would like. I am no expert, but I would love to work more with my horse anatomy if you dont mind :3

My gallery · by **flight;;** » Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:06 am

I would love for you to redline it preppy! Thank you very much. c:

My gallery · by **preppy paws** » Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:12 am

Not a problem! Do you know what breed you are looking at exactly for this sketch?

My gallery · by **flight;;** » Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:21 am

Not really, I went off of a number of poses/references.
I'm not quite sure what breed I was aiming for at the time.
It looks like it could have been an akhal teke?
I dunno, sorry. cx

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