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Behold; Failure! by dmlp

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Behold; Failure!

Postby dmlp » Tue Nov 19, 2013 11:14 am

So, this is my sorry attempt at a phoenix...I tried...any tips for me? Please I could really use some.

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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby dmlp » Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:17 pm

no one want's to tell me how I can improve? I could really use some advice
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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby On_The_Darkest_Night » Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:23 pm

trust me, phoenixes take a lot of practice! I would go a bit easier on the air brush and instead focus on blending, make the colors fade together so they look brighter and more alive. :thumbup:
fairytales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that they can be beaten. -G.K. Chesterton Image
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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby dmlp » Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:27 pm

Thank you, I'll keep that in mind ^_^
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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby ethernautics » Tue Nov 19, 2013 2:38 pm

very good! ;u;
tip: try to make the edges more clear and defined.
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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby dmlp » Wed Nov 20, 2013 10:46 pm

Thank you. And actually. As I was finishing I had tried to give a thin outline but it looked really bad so I'm like "Screw it!" *table flips* "It's going on as is!" But thank you, I'll keep that in mind as well
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Re: Behold; Failure!

Postby ethernautics » Mon Nov 25, 2013 4:02 am

le boomp~ c:


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